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87、争先恐后努力进取

更新时间:2020-01-26 21:40:25 | 本章字数:1812

     

    写作文对学生来说是一项比较难以完成的作业。每次作文课上阿华都要求学生认真思考,写出自己的最高水平,她也经常告诉学生平时多看看书报等课外读物,对写作文都有好处。本来大家认为英语是阿华所学专业,想不到她对写作也是比较精通的。每次作文课,她都告诉学生们:“在写作文时,个别单词和句子能用英语表达出来的尽可能用英语写,这样我们可以随时随地巩固和复习英语。”她真正是英语专业的毕业生啊,多年啦,她一直这样做。

    一次作文要写一个家庭,阿华布置后,简单地做了要求,说:“一个家庭是由多人组成的,有爸爸、妈妈,有的还和爷爷奶奶、姥姥姥爷住在一起的,各个家庭不一样,人口有多有少。要求你们能够写出你自己家庭的真实面貌,字数在百字左右。这篇作文下周一交齐,我要选出几篇最好的在班级里阅读。”

    星期一早晨,作文作业由学习委员阿娟收齐后交到了老师办公室,阿华仔细阅读着每篇作文,每篇作文都有感动的词语让她兴奋不已。翻着、看着,让她意想不到的是有两篇作文是用非常流利的英语写成的。她认真阅读每一个单词、每句话,她从心里为有这样的学生而骄傲。她把这两篇作文让给其他的英语老师看,她们也为阿华能够培养出一个用英语写作文的学生而高兴。

    下午班会上,阿华就这次作文做出了评价,她挑选了具有代表性的优秀作文,让学生在班会上朗读,其目的就是鼓励他们同时也促进那些对写作文态度不认真明确的学生。最后,她说:“这次的作文我们班里大部分同学写得都很好,而且还有两篇作文是用英语写的。”同学们在底下议论开了:“啊,这么厉害!谁呀?”“是吗?用英语写作文?这也太厉害了!”“哇塞,谁呀?”

    阿华老师继续说:“对,是我们班的,这两名同学就是阿军和阿梅。”底下又开锅了:“啊,他们俩?哇塞!”“平时他们的英语也并不怎么地呀?能用英语写作文?这太不可思议了吧!”“听老师给我们念念吧!”

    阿华等同学们安静下来后,又说:“同学们,我们不可用老眼光看待人!人都是要前进、要进步的,阿军、阿梅的英语也不是一时就学会的。他们俩个暗暗组成了互助学习伙伴,互相学习、互相帮助,不懂的地方俩人就在一起讨论或者找资料、请教别人,所以他们的学习成绩有了显著的进步。阿军的英语不太好,但在阿梅的帮助下,阿军终于摆脱了学习中的困境,对英语学习充满了信心。这次的作文他们俩个一商量,干脆用英语写来提高自己的水平。好,现在我开始读他们的作文。这是阿军的。”

    My Family

        I have a happy family. There are four people in my family, my grandmother, my father, my mother and me.

        My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat, so I often call him “fat man”. He works at a factory. My mother works at a hospital. She has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on sports with my mother. On holidays my family often goes to travel. I study at Shengli Primary School. We are very happy.

    下面是阿梅的作文: My Family

    My name is Amei. I am from a worker\'s family. There are six people in my family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my sister and I.

    Every member in my family works for his or her own trade. My grandfather and grandmother are peasants. They do farm work every day. My father is a senior engineer. He is now working in Vietnam, helping to build a power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a middle school. My sister, five years older than I, is a doctor in the People\'s Hospital of our county. She loves her work and does it well. I am a primary school student. And I am going to be a scientist like Edison. But now I must work hard on all the subjects so that I could be enrolled by a famous university in the future.

    That is my family. All the members in my family live in harmony. I love my family.

    阿华刚读完这两篇英语作文,同学们就嚷嚷开了:“很精彩,不错!” “阿军真行啊,下暗劲了!” “向他们学习!”等学生们安静下来后,说:“虽然,这两篇作文篇幅不长,也不是用英语写就能够被评为范文,我只是想通过这样的形式让我们班每个学生都能够喜欢上英语,说到底就是为了激发大家学习英语的积极性。Do you understand me?” “Yes, we do。Thank you,teacher。”

    这件事对同学们的促进很大,许多同学为他们的进步而高兴,特别是阿军,过去是一个不求进步的人,现在能够暗暗地使劲追赶同学们,看来谁不努力,谁就要落后啦。
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